After looking at the exemplar and the feedback I got from Dr. Maloney, I relsied that  I should have had written the MLA  format and i should have put the citations in as well. Also most importantly i should have not write it in the 1st person view.  i don’t really think i did someting that was good, but i do had some goals for next time. my goal is to have the habit of writing in 1st person view and also forgeting to put citations.