2 Comments

  1. jacob.shin

    I enjoyed watching this video but I think the voice was a little bit small at the end and I think it would be better if you put some actual drawing in your video.

  2. Samuel

    I like how you use a unique form of media when most of the class used paper cutouts and stop motion. I think this can be improved by further recording and re-recording of certain parts for a better quality video. I also think this is improved by a entire timeline (e.g. There is a long timeline, but events are added along the timezone as the video goes on).

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