Percy Jackson Paragraphs 

Planning: 

 

Paragraph 1 

Title: Positive Relationships between Percy and the others 

 

Topic sentence: Percy Jackson could use positive relationships to improve his life.  

 

Quote 1 

  • Book: “But Mr. Bunner, our Latin teacher, was leading this trip, so I had high hopes.”(Pg. 2) 
  • Article: “Healthy relationships are a vital component of health and wellbeing.” (Pg. 27) 

 

Quote 2:  

  • Book: “Her name is Sally Jackson, she is the best person in the world.” (Pg. 29) 
  • Article: “A review of 148 studies found that people with strong relationships are 50% less likely to die prematurely.” (Pg. 27) 

 

Conclusion sentence: These evidences can show that why Percy could use positive relationships to improve his life. 

 

 

Paragraph 2: 

Title: Percy’s attitude toward school 

 

Introduction: Percy Jackson had a bad attitude toward school because of ADHD. 

 

Quote 1:  

  • Book: “What was so great about me? A dyslexic, hyperactive boy with a D+ report card, kicked out of school for the sixth time in six years.” (Pg. 2) 
  • Article: “For some students, it is a challenge to pay attention in school.” (Pg. 20)  

Quote 2: 

  • Book: “I got into more fights with Nancy Bobofit and her friends. I was sent out into the hallway in almost every class.” (Pg. 17) 
  • Article: “The symptoms include often losing items, not paying attention to details or making careless mistakes in school and not listening most of the time. Getting easily distracted and avoiding activities that require focus are also symptoms.” (Pg. 21) 

 

Conclusion sentence: That’s why Percy Jackson’s behavior in school was distracted by ADHD.  

 

 

 

Percy Jackson is a troubled kid that studies in a private school in New York City called Yancy academy. He had a bad attitude at school because of ADHD, but he could improve his life by using his positive relationships between him and the others. 

 

 

 Percy Jackson was a troubled kid that studied in a private school called Yancy Academy in New York City. But he could use positive relationships to improve his life. For example, on page 2 of the book Percy Jackson said, “But Mr. Bunner, our Latin teacher, was leading this trip, so I had hopes.” It can show that Percy and his Latin teacher Mr. Bunner had a positive relationship. Also, on page 27 of an article Why Personal Relationship Are Important by University of Minnesota said, “Healthy relationships are a vital component of health and wellbeing.” It shows that this kind of relationships between Percy and Mr. Bunner could improve his life. Another example, on page 29 of the book, “Her name is Sally Jackson, she is the best person in the world.” And “A review of 148 studies found that people with strong relationships are 50% less likely to die prematurely.” That’s why Percy Jackson could improve his life by using positive relationship even though he was a troubled kid. 

 

Percy Jackson had a bad attitude towards school because of ADHD. For example, on page 2 of the book Percy Jackson “What was so great about me? A dyslexic, hyperactive boy with a D+ report card, kicked out of school for the sixth time in six years.” Also, in the article, “The symptoms include often losing items, not paying attention to details or making careless mistakes in school and not listening most of the time. Getting easily distracted and avoiding activities that require focus are also symptoms.” show that Percy was a troubled kid that affected by ADHD. Another example, in the book Percy Jackson, “I got into more fights with Nancy Bobofit and her friends. I was sent out into the hallway in almost every class.” (Pg. 17) and “The symptoms include often losing items, not paying attention to details or making careless mistakes in school and not listening most of the time. Getting easily distracted and avoiding activities that require focus are also symptoms.” (Pg. 21 of the article) can also show that Percy’s symptom is because of ADHD. That’s why Percy’s behavior could get caused by ADHD. 

 

Percy Jackson is a troubled kid that studies in a private school in New York City called Yancy academy. He had a bad attitude at school because of ADHD, but he could improve his life by using his positive relationships between him and the others. 

 

Percy Jackson might get better in his life by using his positive relationships between him and the other school kids even though a troubled kid.