1)

So what?

Consider how the pandemic has an impact on why people cannot afford housing, try to start centering the data about housing prices & the increase around Melbourne, research more on unemployment, fix questions to be more specific.

2)

So what?

Make questions more specific to one city in Australia, focus more of the research on the specific data, not broad/in general.

3)

So what?

More connections between the rising property prices and unemployment rate, some ways cities have been fixing the problem, direct research to look for ways cities are fixing the problem.

4)

So what?

Direct research more to look at how poverty has changed in Melbourne/Australia, fix supporting question to be more specific.

Plan

• Make necessary changes to supporting questions [more specific]
• Direct research more to one specific city within Australia
• Dig deeper into SQ#4 about how poverty has changed throughout time in Melbourne