What I did well

I think I covered the main ideas of the topic pretty well and demonstrated use of CER paragraphs

 

What I want to improve on

Pay more attention on small details, such as capitalization. And learn how to write hooks more clear.

 

Marked different

There were some places where I marked different than Ms. Rivera, and I see why she marked that way after reading my feedback

 

Biggest challenge

The biggest challenge for me was to put all the information I gathered together and make the paragraphs make sense. Also using MLA format because I never learnt about it.