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i organized my project in time order, starting with the oldest
it’s a hard time that future 6th graders might not go through, but it might happen again.
i did my final project smoother than any others
citation was still a issue
Your point about that in the journal you said that six weeks passed by and that you have a lot of friends that are leaving was interesting because that you can remember that 7 weeks passed and that a lot of friends are leaving. Your six-word memoir made me think that there is a lot of homework that we had to do. Your primary source made me think that my mom and dad sometimes fight to and at the other second they are better.
Hi Fiona,
I think that your background is really interesting and makes people look at it and have a basic idea of what you’re going to be talking about. I also like how you wrote the different topics making it clear and easy to understand.
Your 6-word memoir made me think and ponder about what you said and how you used the word “calmly”, I thought that most people would feel rushed or excited but your word changed my thoughts.
One more thing that caught my eye is the way you used a timeline to show your project from 2.27 to 4.16.2020.