This is an reflection for the argumentative essay I wrote for Humanities.

Two things I did well:

• I feel like my arguments were logical and well-structured.

• I feel like I used the right arguments and evidence for the purpose of persuading others.

Two things I can improve on:

• I feel like I can improve on the introduction because they weren’t as detailed

• I think my conclusion were too short and weren’t very thought-inducing

 

I feel like this essay was a nice essay. Perhaps a bit rushed, but still good. Some evidence were not cited because they were never planned to be part of the essay, or I just forgot to add the citations to my planning document. Some places were a bit too short, others too long. Some places were hard to understand. Some places were too concise and didn’t contain enough emotions. But still good, because my arguments were good and persuasive, and it sounded good.