One thing I think you did particularly well is that, you are doing a great job of sharing your thoughts in the journals and the emotional timeline. This is helpful for me as a reader because I could really understand and connect to your emotions during that time. Additionally, I found this primary source to be similar to mine because the thoughts and emotions in the primary source I created, are really related/connected to yours. Lastly, something that might help to make this source stronger is that you could also include some notes that you took from the news articles you read. This could increase the reliability of this source even higher.
May 15, 2020 at 6:49 pm
One thing I think you did particularly well is that, you are doing a great job of sharing your thoughts in the journals and the emotional timeline. This is helpful for me as a reader because I could really understand and connect to your emotions during that time. Additionally, I found this primary source to be similar to mine because the thoughts and emotions in the primary source I created, are really related/connected to yours. Lastly, something that might help to make this source stronger is that you could also include some notes that you took from the news articles you read. This could increase the reliability of this source even higher.