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March 23, 2023 at 11:05 am
star- great language, effective expression of emotion.
next- clearer organization structure, what are the three events leading up to the turning point?
May 25, 2023 at 12:00 am
Wait, You Read This…?!
Em…Yeah, This is terrible…em…so…Yes…and…yes…
Yes, you totally get what I mean, em, yes, correctly, perfectly, absolutely, flawlessly