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Product design summative

The strength of out product is you could eat the whole piece of sushi really easy and it is easy to control but the con of this point is that it is hard to not ruin the sushi, it doesn’t really impact the environment since it is not made of plastic so it won’t really impact the environment.

Most of the feedback from our project is explain our project more clearly and adding more detail to our product.(example; make the drawing more clear or make the explaining more clear) but lot of them like our idea and our drawing. These comments for me is kind of helpful because it could help us to improve.

One of the example of our product that failed at last is about the extension claws for chopstick for sushi, it failed at last cause it is too difficult to do it so we didn’t chose that for our product.

“Faliure”(originally from Thank you ma’am)

author(original):Langston Hughes

 

The story comes from the first several paragraph from the short story “yes ma’am”

For my Found poem, it was found in the passage Thanks ma’am, this poem include both external and internal conflict, saying external conflict first, the part that shows the external conflict is about when the boy wants to steal her purse but his plan had failed and he got kicked by Mrs. Jones” a boy ran. up and snatch her purse but the boy’s weight and the weight of the purse caused him to lose his balance , the boy fell on the woman and kicked his blue jeaned sitter”. This showed that it is man versus man cause there is only movement between people and people. The internal conflict is when the part she was asking the boy why is he stealing his pocket book which give the boy a lot of feeling of oppression which caused to be scared about the woman( for usual, people wants to ran away cause it is way too scary.” kicked his blue jeaned sitter and shook him until she said. “Now you ashamed of yourself, the boy said”yes’m”. this part showed that he was really scared of this woman because he is caught by the woman.

 

For the picture, there is a purse which is related to the woman’s purse and there is also a pocketbook as a picture cause in detail, the boy had steal the pocketbook, the light shows that it is in a really late time( it is almost impossible to open a light on road in the morning or afternoon) the picture of pants is about the blue jeans cause the woman had kicked his blue jeans and the last pic which there is two people which shows the part about the part that the woman shook him.

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