My poem was found in the article “The Last kiss” by Ralph Flectcher. I found all my words in the page 2. In this story, the main conflict is a type of external conflict (main character vs. nature). But in my poem, I’d like to do the other type of internal conflict, which is character vs. his own emotions. The whole story is describe when”I” (First-person perspective) was young, I used to get the kisses from “my” mum and dad. But after a several years “I” grew up, “I” found that “I” would never get a kiss from “my” father again. After I read and analyzed the whole article, I found the main character must experienced the pain of growth. So I decided to focus on when “I” lost “my” fathers’ kiss. How does “I” feels like. “I” must feels lonely and a kind of sad. So my poem also full of lonely emotions. All the “quiet” “sinking heart” “silence” shows the feeling of loss and sadness after the main character doesn’t get a kiss. For the background picture I chose a picture of the moon and the sea. Because This background is dark, which also better shows the whole lost atmosphere. On the whole, this poem is in line with the conflicts and feelings in the whole article. I’m satisfied with this poem.
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