Composition & Technique
1. Focal Point & Eye Movement
Viewers first notice Ceci’s smile and bright red roses against the rest of the monochrome body and background. My goal was to highlight all the flowers. Danielle’s small roses, Amber’s sunflower, Elva’s cream colored flower, Emily’s orange dahlia and Ceci’s red roses each represent a unique personality in a societal role. Ceci’s central spot pulls too much focus though making other flowers a bit hard to see. The original photo felt a bit boring and had no depth so I boosted each flower’s color saturation for clearer definition and layerd differnt. Faces are not the focus here. I wanted the flowers to be the main story for my societal structure theme.
2. Distracting Elements
Overlapping figures make the photo feel messy. Danielle is top left, Amber is top right, Elva is bottom left, Emily is bottom right and Ceci is center. All overlap in places. Faint grid lines add extra clutter. However without them, the photo seems like it is missing something. These issues made me rely on color editing to make the floral symbols my project’s core stand out.
3. Exposure
The monochrome figures are evenly exposed with no harsh shadows or overexposure. I edited the flowers to be brighter and more saturated so they pop against the gray scale even with overlapping figures. The plain light gray background has no exposure issues keeping focus on the subjects and flowers. This balance helps minimize attention to faces and maximize the floral symbols’ impact.
4. Background
The simple gray background keeps focus on the figures and flowers. It is a neutral canvas that makes the colored blooms stand out especially Elva’s soft cream flower and Danielle’s small roses. The downside is no specific depth, and makes the photo a bit unbalanced and messy. Going to the future I want to try to make everyone in one shot when I take the photo so it wouldnt be hard with the background and making them look connected but not connected at the same time.
5. Composition & Balance
Ceci’s central position creates symmetrical balance but makes the photo feel still and without life. The grid like arrangement of other figures adds structure but amplifies the messy overlap. Using the rule of thirds would have made the composition more dynamic and reduced overlap. Vertical figure lines contrast with round flower shapes adding interest but making the frame feel unbalanced. The bottom half is heavier with Elva and Emily. Danielle’s small roses and Amber’s sunflower are most overshadowed by this layout.
6. Color Accuracy
I chose monochrome figures to shift focus away from faces and onto the flowers. I enhanced each flower’s color beyond its natural hue to make them distinct. Deeper pink for Danielle’s small roses, soft warm glow for Elva’s cream flower and bold hues for the others. This makes the flowers have its natural color but it also helps each flower stand for a unique showing the intention of societal role. It was my main way to fix the messy composition and make my message clear.
Storytelling Quality
• My vision is clear. Flowers are metaphors for how individuals shape society. Each person’s bloom has a unique meaning. Danielle’s small roses equal quiet connection, Amber’s sunflower equals positivity, Elva’s cream flower equals calm stability, Emily’s dahlia equals diversity and Ceci’s red roses equal strong confidence and how that ties many people together. Monochrome figures show how identities can fade into the background while colored flowers highlight unique contributions.
• Subtle expressions add depth to the societal metaphor. Ceci’s smile, Amber’s neutral gaze, Elva’s serious look, Emily’s calm expression and Danielle’s hidden face all matter. Even with faces as secondary flowers and expressions communicate the complexity of community roles. Overlapping figures mirror real world interconnectedness. No one exists in isolation.
• The messy overlap reflects the chaos of society while distinct flower colors show how individual contributions still shine through. Danielle’s small roses and Elva’s cream flower are perfect examples. They are easy to miss but represent essential understated roles in a healthy community.
Emotional Impact
• The contrast between muted figures and bright flowers show hope and individuality. Viewers think about how unique traits can shape the world around them. Elva’s cream flower and Danielle’s small roses add a gentle balance to the bolder blooms of Ceci and Amber.
• Ceci’s central smile creates warmth and connection making the photo relatable despite its stylized look. It gives viewers a human hook to engage with the societal theme even if it pulls focus from the flowers. Danielle’s small roses and Elva’s cream flower add quiet warmth that makes the photo feel more true to real society.
• The messy composition makes viewers pause and look closer encouraging them to notice the flowers’ symbolism. This curiosity leads to a deeper understanding of how individual roles matter in a complex society. Danielle’s small roses and Elva’s cream flower are often the last blooms noticed making their symbolic meaning feel more special.
















