Strengths: used supportive quotes for the written claim. And I also had an interesting introduction that includes the background information for my poet and how it relates to the poem I chose to analyze.

Weaknesses: when it comes to conclusion, I don’t really know what to write. Need to study or find better exemplars that have an interesting, efficient conclusion. I should use an in-text citation to cite where I got my poet’s background information from, and I could use more supporting quotes.

Goal: I need to organize my essay better. Sometimes I would end up using a quote over and over again, but that’s not what is expected. I would need to go back and constantly edit.

Action to Achieve Goal: Have an organized, great constructed outline before I start drafting my essay.