The Hamster Bite

The first draft of the writing is a bit crappy, but now, it has been through much editing to come to this final project. The recent project is not the first idea I came up with; the first one is when I was just born. I was dead for 30 seconds, and I got revived by the doctor just before I was permanently unconscious. That didn’t work because I don’t remember anything other than what my mom told me. The punctuation is a big obstacle for me. I passed it and did what’s feels right. Surprisingly I didn’t mess up with the punctuations when I start to feel the story come to life and begin to feel like I am experiencing the shot and the bite altogether.