Eugene

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You are Not Alone – A Short Documentary about Mental Health

Breaking Down Unbroken

Unbroken by Laura Hillenbrand, a book illustrated the story of Louie Zamperini. The transformation of a rouge child, specialized in stealing and drinking alcohol at the age of 8 into a piolet fighting in World War 1. Louie’s adventure starts when his older brother Pete discovers his ability to run. Along the way, Louie had broken many records and was a track star until World War 1 raged out. Forced to join the military, Louie once again, found himself on the run. Perseverant, courageous, quick thinking, Louie overcame devastating obstacles, fighting for equality, fighting for peace.

The book kicked off as the first few chapters formed the theme – anything can be achieved with determination and hard work. Below is how I tracked my thinking.

In lesson 8, we were told to be careful with parts that might seem stretched out intentionally to help readers gain more understanding. As I read further, when the book is reaching its highlight, the theme drifted off to become – among all the chaos and hate, kind souls will always spark over dark ones. The theme – “Anything can be achieved with determination and hard work” still hot on its heels.

As the book goes on, the earlier themes melted away. The idea – POWs (prisoners of war) captured are strong. They fight for their country and will be willing to sacrifice themselves. Stood out the most. Also having a strong connection with the theme – anything can be achieved with determination and hard work.

Unbroken is an amazing book. I will recommend this book to people that like books with history, adventure, and a bit of thriller.

 

Narrative

I think I did pretty well because I wrote this last year and there’s a big difference with the last year’s one and this one. I added stronger words and sentences. It’s better and longer too. My challenge is that I don’t know how to describe the theme. There’s a big difference between my first draft and the final now. At first, I used both past and present tense and no fugitive languages. My first draft is a really weird piece of writing that doesn’t make any sense . But now, I added a lot of fugitive languages and all using past tense. It’s also one of my best narrative writing I have ever written.

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