- Do you need any props?: Yes
- Is your vision clear? Can you develop the story further?: Yes, During my photoshoot, I will be telling a story about A girl (marine animal) felt regret and sadness after seeing her home polluted. The photo has two elements, the first is a white rose, and the second is blue silk. The white rose symbolizes the last purity/purity left in the ocean (unpolluted), while the blue silk symbolizes the polluted part. And in this set of photograph, the different between the first set is this set his when the girl grown up, and looking back to her childhood, and express her feelings of remembering.
- What locations/backgrounds/props/costumes could enhance your story?: An indoor location would be perfect for my photoshoot. background could be in a lighter color tone, because it will fite more with my blue silk. My props are Fake white rose, It symbolizes the pure in the sea. Costumes are white dress, the light color worked very well with the blue light.
- Experiment with the background: Most of my photographs is my model lying on the floor, So the range required for the background is very small, so I used a small piece of blue silk as the photography background, and also used my white rose prop to form the background
•Experiment with aperture. Shutter speed and framing
•Experiment with Photoshop techniques including but not restricted to B&W conversion, levels, cropping and sharpening.
(Sample photos I have taken for Camera test.)
Evaluate/Critique:
Composition / Technique – Do all the elements of the frame support the subject, or are there distractions that take away from the strength of the image?: All elements of the framework support the strength of the subject image
•Where are my eyes immediately drawn? Where do you want the eyes to go?: The eyes should Immediately drawn to the persons face, I want the eyes been drawn to the the model’s facial expressions.
•Are There Any Distracting Elements?: Not really, I have asked some people for feedback, they told be maybe for some images, the flower is kind of distracting to let the viewers look straight at the models face, but only for 1-3 photos, the rest are good.
•Is the Exposure Correct?: Yes
•Would it Look Better Through a Different Focal Length?: I think I have been contributing the right Focus In these photographs, I have also been trying different focal length in some of my photos and it worked pretty well.
•What is the Background Doing?: The background is just trying to make the studio not look like a studio, and make the model look like lying in the sea water.
•How is the Composition & Balance?: I think I worked well
•Is the Colour Accurate?: Yes, it is.
•Does the Depth of Field Suit the Photo?: Yes
Storytelling quality – Does it show your vision?/Is the vision clear?: Yes
Emotional Impact – How well does your audience identify with the picture? What emotions captured in your portrait will cause the audience to respond positively? (Get feedback from others for this part): I have gathered feedback from 3 friends, 2 of them think my main topic for the set of photos is “The feeling of longing”. And the other person think that the main topic is Sadness, however the main topic I’m trying to spread is “The nostalgia for the once pure ocean and the sadness for the polluted ocean now”
Blue shoots:
My main topic for this project is “The nostalgia for the once pure ocean and the sadness for the polluted ocean now” and to spread awareness. For these photos, I’m mostly finding my angle and ideas through trying. And I found out if gives different kind of emotions when the blue light is darker (It gives an emotion of the Girl is covered with blue sea water, Give people a feeling of suffocation). While when the blue lighting is lighter it gives another emotion ( It gives an viewing of The girl lay in the fresh water, with no light or hope in her eyes. A faint blue light shone on her face, combined with her facial expression, revealing despair, nostalgia, and sadness).
Green shoots:
After figuring out the dark and light for the lighting, I have chosen the lighter tone. I dropped 15 photos from the blue shoot, and the 25 remaining photos are the ones I found really shows my main topic and the lighting is feels perfect on my models faces. But I’m starting to think about how different facial expressions and movements affect the beauty of the photographs.
Red Shoots:
photographs, It’s mainly focused on Lighting, facial expressions, and angle. The photograph lighting is mainly Blue lighting tone, but also white lighting to make the blue color lighter. There’s not to much facial expressions because of the angle, but the viewers could also see the sadness, the melancholy. The angle is the most important element in this set of photos, also this photograph, the camera angle is shooted on the models head. The main symbol in these three photos are White rose, and blue silk. I want my audience to feel the sadness by the girl, the main topic is shown by the lighting and the facial expression, and I want my audience to feel after when the ocean is polluted and her home will never be back as it use to be. But when she’s grown up, Her perspective on things is also more mature, and what she thinks is no longer what she once thought. The same action, on her face as before, showed despair, sadness, and regret. But now what we see on her face is relief, like telling the sea, “I’ve grown up, I can protect you now.”
It is very simular to the photographer I have inspired, we kindof had the same topic, which is protecting the ocean. In her photographs, she used a girl and made her looked like an mermaid, and lying on a dilapidated ship, looking very desperate, like a fish on the brink of death, but having given up struggling, there was still a pile of garbage next to it.
(Sample photo of the photographer i’ve Inspired name Wuxin)
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