Overall, I believe that my photos are quite successful. Although they were not chosen as the top 12 photos, I made a clear connection with my chosen photographer, Andre Kertesz, who also used loneliness and distortion to form abstract street photography. For example, I used the blurry fog to cover some parts of the building in the top right photo, which made the whole scene quite dreamy and confusing. Also, the down left photo of two people watching a view of the lake showed a peaceful view, which further achieved my focus (which was actually similar to my abstraction photographies). If there is something I would improve on next time, I would try to make my photos slightly more street and people based instead of abstraction based, which my friends gave me suggestions on making closer shots to see people’s expressions and faces. I would also want to work on making a variety of moods, because what I have for my contact sheet seems a bit plain on the mood. Finally, my biggest takeaway is  to take photos without worrying that they would be ‘bad’ photos so i can have more opportunities to capture better shots