
– Where are my eyes immediately drawn? Where do you want the eyes to go?
First of all, it attracts the viewer’s eyes to the person in the center, who is fully captured from head to toe. It seems that the intention here is to lead the eyes upward from the legs toward the ball and then toward the face.
-Any distracting elements?
The color of the clothes blends with the background (both are dark).
-Is exposure correct?
Probably, the sky is a bit bright.
-Would another focal length help?
No. The transe shot draws the viewer’s attention to the person rather than the background. It increases subject’s presence.
-What is the background doing?
Open field and bright sky create a fresh and sporty mood.
Composition & Balance
Strong leading lines from the legs guide the viewer upward(also the subject is placed center). The low angle gives a dynamic feeling.
– Color accuracy
The blue sky (background) looks natural and pleasing. However, it would have been better if there were more colors in the photo because, overall, it is a bit too bluish.
-Depth of field
Medium depth of field keeps the foreground crisp and softly separates the background.

– Where are my eyes immediately drawn? Where do you want the eyes to go?
The eyes go first to the subject’s face, where the bright light across her cheeks is. I wanted the viewer’s eyes to focus on her facial expression by highlighting with the warm sunlight on her face.
– Any distracting elements?
Probably the light can be considered to be kind of overexposed.
– Is the exposure correct?
Slightly overexposed. A bit of detail is lost to the light.
-Would it look better with a different focal length?
A wider focal length would have probably added more environmental elements such as sky or trees. The mood of the photo would become warmer. But her emotion would be less emphasized.
-What is the background doing?
Ground covered with leaves creates a seasonal texture, framing the subject and supporting her.
-Composition & Balance
The high-angle point of view with a centered composition creates a symmetrical feel. It feels balanced.
– Color accuracy
Overall Colors lean warm, which enhances the autumn mood.
-Depth of field
The shallow depth of field keeps the viewer’s focus on the subject.

-> Actually, this photo has a clear intention. The gun is not shown directly as a real thing. It suggests that the man is not facing a real gun but is experiencing inner pain, which is shown through the shadow. Even though his face looks expressionless, he is likely feeling deep emotional suffering inside.
-Where are my eyes immediately drawn? Where do you want the eyes to go?
Attention is drawn to the man’s face first. The brightly lit area on his cheek makes a contrast to the other parts of him, so it pulls focus there first. Ideally, the viewer should shift focus from the man to the threatening shadow of the toy gun behind him. This creates tension and storytelling in the photo.
-Are there any distraction elements?
If I edit the irregular shadow spread in the background, the picture might appear more organized.
-Is the exposure correct?
I think light and dark contrast is good.
-Would it look better through a different focal light?
I can use softer side lighting to create a mood without blowing out highlights. Then a dimmer light on the face would balance the shadows better.
-What is the background doing?
Because the background is plain, it allows the man and the gun’s shadow to be the main elements, which enhances the dramatic effect.
-How is the composition and balance?
It is balanced because the man is placed right and the shadow gun is placed left.
-Is the color accurate?
I feel that the black and white color gives better contrast overall.





















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